Pocket Editor #3
Here’s a great concept for a comic, and one that’s sadly needed with the number of typos I see in mini comics: put definitions of words at the bottom of the page. “You’re”? Contraction of you are. “Your”? Possessive pronoun, used as an adjective that precedes a noun. Naturally, it doesn’t matter how informative the book is if the story sucks, and it’s hard to tell on this one because it’s too short. It’s a little tale about some people at a beach losing their car keys when it starts to rain, in case I never mention that sort of thing any more. A fun story and a fun concept, plus it’s only $.50, so check out the contact info above and send her some money!